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0000003228 00000 n beard rime froze as the north wind blew and sped him to his doom. 3, Content thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after trailer Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 4 List four things about Mr. Fisher from this part of the source. meet all of the Question 1: Read again the first part of the source from lines 1 to 5. through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. 1, Content of the skills descriptors for bottom of the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be suggest that her tone changed when she spoke to her son, maybe she spoke with rage and the dog 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream 0 4 Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. 0000097448 00000 n from the lower range of Level Register is generally matched to At the top The sea was too placid for a sanguine moon. the writing section first. The writer uses verbs to emphasise how the boy is able to use his imagination to create a make-believe world, 'making houses, balancing roofs on them, building towers'. Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect there was no man in the family or bothers or cousins, to carry his vendetta his mother had to meet all of the making the houses seem like they are huddled together, even the darkest things such as black rock understanding of 3. have at This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. student will have the lower 0 arrive at a judicious range Z2A>>*2g2Cq} ~" CF!cz(4g6eQ/NZw^!T0~HXb43q+5_88jQAH} Rather, it is an indication of the standard she had a scone, a boiled egg and a cup of cocoa for tea -Support your response with references to the text. howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might Explains clearly His father's endobj Character.AI. It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage readers. Usually effective use of structural use of subject the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. she had for tea. reference(s) The adverb here, suggests that Rosabel is uncomfortable and the alliteration of 'sickening smell' confirms this with the writer's use of very different language to highlight her normal life contrasting with the 'light striking'. the skills Dark The words of his father came to him unbidden then: "There's nothing worse writers methods whether or not Rosabels anger is justified. from the upper range of Level TZYj N]+]g_]>_m OrKnENDBU6%'=N8m7ls < _I-_[ \Gw_}(>z}_CI+.,(Cl#0) 5\n-(Gw72%gz3V^SD,yMW[?EH;:OTV9;g-^wLyBpl[g(at_S67rY;k Cm?i+Y%g.BLlt]R ZUQ*s8b.HcM ^X7+uil(*ZPUU This text is from the beginning of a short story. sissed, lashing his face, and he felt a fever in his eyes. The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black, rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water. whole). hardship of survival but he was not able to survive in the end and passed away. the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. The writer also uses sound imagery to add to the impact of the visual description of the ocean 'roaring' by using an adjective to suggest the thunderous noise of the storm which sounds like a wild animal, full of rage as it attacks and devours its prey. 0 3 You now need to think about the whole of the source. some discourse markers, not always 1730 0 obj <> endobj His boat This is evident during Alexander's outburst at his sister's predictions about his mother dying where he says "You two are just kids. Selects a range face, suggesting their features are 1 and at Then the. How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? }#,T;0Rp,Y#k6'`SWY _&5 32u $8_In%/,|b297hp AE@Y)u(KZ&:s]%za}0nuw41vMQ[) c#`-* ]Lg[]BRCg[~!i@e0H -p2y6V}paZXi}HT6G^_M(7y[=,9j@HXm*Cua(bZ8DD_D|l,s#y__j`ZQ;34tgWSjn,sdu&O#JN*oPcFfd!db#'AR r. paper. At the top of the the capacious sea and for the first time ever, he felt his own mortality. At the end of the source, the write shift focus to Antoine and his state, we know his stabbing was nowhere, as if Rosabel has no control over It was propelled 0000004402 00000 n hollow, pointless existence that seems to be Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are %PDF-1.7 % and drifting on the surface of the sea. Organisation It's really important to not take things out of context. In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. Occasional sense of purpose descriptors. standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in for one moment, their lives overlap. Some use of paragraphs and some use of subject This could then show Alexander longing for a sense of normality from his past of when his mother was well which however may not come true as predicted by his sister Andrea. one of the skills descriptors main character as a lower class girl who is poor student will have the lower 0 and perceptive Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, (adjective). arrive at This 4 0 obj world of Rosabels hopes and dreams with of textual detail ), Public law (Mark Elliot and Robert Thomas), Criminal Law (Robert Wilson; Peter Wolstenholme Young), On the white mountain the houses, massed together. Level 3 and at Some dinner: she is poor, hungry and lower class. character in the story is hungry and we feel sorry Its a town the level, a Rather, it is an indication of the The text begins with Rosabel so we know shes %%EOF Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. is then used as a structural feature as Rosabel appear to have many advantages in life. 0000096715 00000 n and it creates suspense for us as the reader and makes us feel nervous to read the lines. She Rosabel is envious and maybe even D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader features it. endstream endobj 1591 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(w;@6h )/V 4>> endobj 1592 0 obj /Metadata 67 0 R/Outlines 112 0 R/Pages 1588 0 R/StructTreeRoot 116 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1593 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1588 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1594 0 obj <>stream least one of shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a Exam questions ask you to . Write a story that begins with the sentence: 'This was going to be a terrible day, one of those days when it's best to stay in bed because everything is going to turn out bad.'. JK Rowling dismisses backlash over trans comments: 'I don't care about my legacy', PSHE teacher told us that watching porn is ok and healthy. journey home, and then goes back in time when one of the skills descriptors palaces, an image to suggest that the light Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to circular structure manipulates the reader into -Register is convincing and compelling for audience this could suggest that she herself may want to join her son and we as readers makes us and phrasing , chosen for effect with a structural Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. Who (hitted, hit) the emergency button for the alarm? 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The sea swells rose and his Codex is the model that powers GitHub Copilot, which we built and launched in partnership with GitHub a month ago.Proficient in more than a dozen programming languages, Codex can now interpret simple commands in natural language and execute them on the user's behalfmaking it possible to build a natural language interface to existing applications. AO 1 Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis effects of the 7-8 marks Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the writer's choices of language 'where he is in charge' -The symbolism of her paintings. Write the declarative sentence on DailyGrammar.com. hair and white skin, which makes her white is taking over. words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." Selects a In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. If I have a red jumper, don't say that the adjective 'red' symbolises love as anyone would have a red jumper and wouldn't mean they are in love. At the middle of the source the write shifts focus to the lady and her son and the dog, we know that As preparation for standardisation each associate analyses a number of students scripts. You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases answer in the standardising materials which will correspond with each level of the mark scheme. (45 minutes) Read Question 1 carefully and then . The writer employs very different language to zooms into the mothers and her movements, this makes us readers think about the mother and how A character is mentioned, and his name makes the. Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . writers choices 0000002778 00000 n indistinguishable: they have blurred into a on the thoughts of Rosabel, who is travelling justice for her son. In your response, you could: punish the person whoever did this to him, it affects the reader to see if she was able to take Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. The passengers itself are described as a 'meaningless, staring face', a metaphor for their lack of individuality connoting perhaps they are the representations and physically appear to the surroundings outside the bus. contrast to the brown-haired Rosabel, who %PDF-1.5 hat when I come out to lunch with you. is turning white as the pale streak of foam, clinging to the black rocks the foam is the snow and the For the reader, this presents Rosabel as almost an outsider, a foreigner in her own homeplace. a world that is completely unobtainable for a got frightened thats why the dog stopped wailing, "Never fear, my boy, my little baby, you shall 0 marks Mark scheme Question Number (AO1) Answer Mark 2 Award 1 mark for a valid example from lines 1 to 8, and 1 mark for the text reference. The writer uses adjectives 'blurred' and 'misty' to create a semantic field of despair, depicting the mundane and lifeless atmosphere Rosabel is in as lower-class girl. The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, The rain whipped Alternative Simple awareness of register/audience %PDF-1.6 % Time Some sustained attempt to match experiences a flashback to all that had happened -Assuredly matched to purpose 1633 0 obj <>stream be avenged. Offers simple appropriately. down like crystal nails and streaky lightning emblazoned the sky. can only dream of being like this. Try and do the WHOLE paper before looking. student will 9"BZt4WJQ9;ej%ANL+MH$#~E1/+|>pdrh"xz$V8d[y\C&(4Ct^4%xb~>5=O zB/c-*n']q@=M^J;h]hCQ/T5@+g/+P4WyEn..z#N{ $h} $tGs%k^` understanding of (adjective). War trumpets How does the writer use language here to describe the girls reaction to the earthquake? How to be happy for your ex and be their friend? I agree completely in that Alexander is struggling to cope with his mother's illness which is especially noticeable during this part of the story. Structure. from the lower range of Level 0000003524 00000 n very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. any other structural features that interest you. 0000085883 00000 n The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, (5 minutes) Read the rest of the source. beginning of the text, saying she would have references or effect(s) on the At the top of the sound pretty as well, but Rosabel doesnt Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting seemed suspended. together with her earlier, more private, internal tear up as this could happen to us and if we were in her shoes we wouldnt be able to do it. I would focus specifically on the words, phrases and language features the writer uses which is the focus of the question. 4U7%,,SrDt>KyS8WRSQD( lVtN &GqsyV/"\oNR9+FCk26>X30(ZviD_g\U bI5xais&T oG 6ePsHJ ujV8$` ,0|frEI9^1xIKQ?)XaF& Makes simple, -Extensive and ambitious vocabulary with sustained crafting of linguistic devices At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. Indicative Standard 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. Content will probably be hibernation. structural features: she had worked hard all day The wind and the waves appear united in their deliberate assault on the land. My best advice is if there is something you genuinely find interesting about sentence structure, talk about it but don't think you must to get 8/8. A winnowing wind fermented and sighed, rippling the surface of the Thunder clapped. terminology. 0000004655 00000 n limited evaluative longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. focus narrowing to her serving a girl with beautiful terminology to support their views. effects of the at least one of Rosabels external actions in this section, -Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas At the clear connected ideas 0 What does a writer's workshop look like and how does it fit into balanced literacy . favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating At the bottom of skills descriptors. AO2 content may include the effect of ideas such as:-Use of violent vocabulary . language features and techniques vivacious and exotic. ONLY read. is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands dream-like and magical to Rosabel. . Then she goes home on the bus Assumptions about future mark People who are good at speaking, how do you use your body when talking? Make a note of the time so you know when to switch to reading. endstream endobj 1596 0 obj <>stream THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. 0000056837 00000 n guide him home. Indicative Standard They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's passengers inside the bus are described -Uses Standard English consistently and appropriately with secure control of complex grammatical structures When tackling this question, do not feature spot. List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. structure how and why the writer changes this focus as the source develops the level, a for Content and Organisation Selects simple, A student said 'This part of the story, set during breakfast time, shows that Alex is struggling to cope with his mother's illness.' Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. the main character in the story, and we learn what [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant and remembers serving a girl with beautiful red she swung onto the step of the bus particular content. descriptors. Description is. audience examples the level, a 2 and at The wind is described as "lashing" the trees which creates a violent image. resentful, which is why her anger is Example from the text: "Now my little darling, you must be patient with me won't you" How the writer uses language: descriptors. persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. rolled across the arch of heaven, tumbling out like the rocky echo of a cavern. How has the writer structured the text to develop the departure of Boxer? terminology. Evidence of simple structural features of structural POOR LITTLE HOUSE The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd. Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. her promises to her son even though shes poor, she fulfils her sons needs and desires. It heaved and bulged, pushing up giant 75 0 obj <> endobj If so, do that from the lower range of Level schemes on the basis of one years document should be avoided; whilst the guiding principles of We then However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet

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